Some feedback from the Interm Crit included criticism of the narration.
As the audience is not based towards criminals any more there's no need in keeping a hard-selling cockney narrator for the audience to relate well to.
The change is to swap the narration from a hard-selling male to a soft-spoken female accent. The sinister undertones of the animation will be more subtle but far more effective with this change.
I've narrowed down a few more voiceover options this time. Ranging from narrators who emulate 1930 accents, to M&S Food Adverts, to ITV.
Caren James
Gina Mellotte
Laura Howarth
Laura Shavin
Posy Brewer
Rebecca Gethings
Vicky Watt
I think the Rebecaa Gethings feel is promising!
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